I finished yet another song last night for anyone who cares to listen. Tell me what you think.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8791598

Definitely like the melody lines. The only thing i would change is i would add some more percussive color. Whether through a high hat or something else, it's a tad bit on the bland side with just the snare and bass.

Also the time feel towards the end (half time to normal) was awesome, but some sort of simple fill proceeding it would make it better.

Overall the flow of the piece was pretty good though. Had a nice build to the climax.

Don't want to seem like some sort of techno critic. just my opinions. Good stuff!

I actually was thinking that myself as far as percussion. It's a REAL pain working with that friggin redrum machine so I tend to get lazy and just have a loop going. I'll probably go back through it and write some fills and add some more timbre.

pretty good, I liked it.

Thanks man, somehow that song has clawed its way up to #12 in the techno charts on soundclick.com

haha that's awesome